How to Write a Good Paragraph

How to Write a Good Paragraph

            Writing a good paragraph require the following specific steps. First, we must choose a topic to write, which related to the information that we have known before. Next, make brainstorming about the information of the topic. Then, make sure that what we want to include and what the readers want to know can be understood. After that, write the topic sentence with several controlling ideas. And then, write a few supporting sentences to support each controlling idea which relate to the topic. Last, the concluding sentence is mostly require in the writing paragraph. In the concluding sentence, topic sentence can be stated, summarized, suggeted, and predicted. Finally, if there is the using words form another source, write it in the quote mark around them. In brief, writing a good paragraph can be easy if we accomplished all the following steps above.

By: Derm Krasang

The Trouble Day of my Friend's Life

The trouble day of my friend’s life

            The horrible day of my friend’s life was begun when he had an accident at the end of high school final examination. My friend, Dara was an outstanding student among grad 12 students. He has prepared all about the hint for exam, and waiting for the day come. The day of feeling excited and nervous for every students was coming. Dara drove his motorbike forward to the exam’s center. After arrived school, he realized that he forgot the student’s identification card. If there was no identification card, otherwise the examiner will do not allow the students come to the class; it made him feel so terrible and afraid so bad, so he decided to turn back in order to took it from home. While he was travel alone the way back school, he does not pay strong attention much. He drove very fast without spiritual in his body. The only memorable thing was an “examination gone” was memorized in his mind. Unexpectedly, when he arrived at the Conner of the Health Center, he was crushing with another motorbike that went a long the opposite direction immediately. The event was making sound like the lighting which everything was broken. My friend was spilled on the ground, his legs and arm was too hurt. After provide the answer to the police, Dara was allowed to come back. And then, he was hurried to come to school while the blood was coming out from is right leg. Unfortunately, when he was arrived, the examiner did not allow him to join with the class because of his seriously pain. Dara got into trouble that day; he failed the exam, but he learned a lot from this remarkable event.

How to Describe a Person You Know

             How to Describe a Person You Know

When I first began to study at university, I was met Mr. Sovan who is my class teacher. Firstly, talking about his appearance, he looks so handsome. He is a tall man, which is 1.80 meter high. He has a slender body, straight hair, white skin, and round face with a beautiful attractive smile. Secondly, talking about his personalities. He is always manage to be a kind person. Moreover, Mr. Sovan is a very fair mind person who is always respectful to everyone. For example, being a good teacher to win students’ heart, he always be a punctual and high responsible person. He never come late whenever he has class.  In addition, he is a logical, friendly, and sociable with the other. Thirdly, talking about his lifestyle, when he come to school, he always wore the simple clothes and it was very good looking. He drove a new car which is not really modern or expensive. In my opinion, Mr. Sovan is a very good and nice teacher I have never met before. 

By: Derm Krasang

My Most Scary Dream

                                     My Most Scary Dream

I will never forget the scare memory in my night sleep. One night during the rainy season, I was sitting near the window in my bedroom. Suddenly, I saw a black cat run past me, it seemed to be strange and horrible cat, and then I decided to follow it. Five minute later, I have found myself in the strange place; it looked like the witch’s house. I saw an old strange lady who had the white long hair, black teeth, and horrible face with the two red eyes. She scowled at me in the very strange way. Then she moved her eyes down because she was busy with cooking her food. Surprisingly, she often tasted it in every three minutes, and said “This soup is not so delicious, it may miss some ingredients.” Immediately, she found something to add, then she saw a black cat run over her. A witch woman rushed to catch it, and throw into the soup’s pot. I asked her lightly that “Why do you do that? It is the stupid cooking!” She answered that “It is my great medicine. The more we test, the more we grow.” I said nothing and went away to another side. While I was standing to find the cat, I feel I was so thirsty, I need some water. After that, the old lady brought me the water, and said “Drink it if you want!” How stupid I was! I drank it immediately. After a movement, I had a little bit strange feeling; I did not know where I should go. And then, the sound of laughing louder and louder were coming into my ear. “You are my slave and I am your master now! Do not think you can get pass me!” At that time, I began difficult to breathe and extremely scar. I think that I was going to die. I began to cry and cream at the top of my lungs. Then, I woke up and knew that it was just a dream, it was not real. Maybe it was my imagination since I have just read the story book about “Alice on Wonderland” at the day time. 

By: Derm krasang

Father! You Surprise Me....

 

Father! You Surprise Me....

There were a man and his little son who were very poor among the other in the village. Every Valentine’s Day time, the son always asking his father about the gift since he see most of his friends get a beautiful and memorable gift from their parents. Whenever he proposes, he never gets it. The words “My dear son, we have no money, father is so poor.” is memorized on his memory since his first born until now. This year, the son was so surprise, he have got two boxes of gift from his father while he didn’t even dear to ask or expect from him. “ Happy Valentine’s Day, and Happy birthday for your 10 years old, my son” The son was so excited and said “ Father, I have asked you for only one gift, why this year you give me two gifts like this? The father had little smile, and said “Let’s open it first, dear...!” The son was very happy and wonders what his father gives to him. First, he starts to open a white box. The son screamed...
“It’s nothing, father! It’s nothing...” (The son is so disappointed)
“Okay, continue to do the next one, my son!”
The son thinks that may be father was kidding him, and then he started to open another black one. He gave all of his hope on this last gift. “It must be the value thing”, he think.
(The boy saw empty black box with the big hole inside) “The empty box again, both are empty boxes...! “Are you kidding me? You are breaking my heart again now!” “I do hate you...” The son was furious, and cried loud out of his lung.”
Father came to near him, and put his hand on his son head.
“Listen to me, my dear. This is what I can give to you. There are two boxes which represent to the happiness and sadness. The white one, you can write down all of your happiness and what you think it is wonderful and keep in it. And the black, you can write down all of your sadness and the thing that make you unhappy. Stop crying, dear...” The son tried to dry his tear and smile while he didn’t understand what his father mean.
One year later, there was the valentine day again now. The father called his son, and told him to open the two boxes. Then, the son brought the white box and said “How heavy it is, father!”
“You see? During a year, how many happiness thing have you got?” Then, the son come to the black one. While he was carrying, all of his papers were fallout from the hole. The boy hurried to pick it up.
“Don’t do it, my son!” “How do you feel now?”
“It’s too light, father. Why do you ask me?”
“Do you see the hole? Your sadness and bad thing are falling down with this paper.” My dear..., keep only the happiness and through your sadness as the rubbish away with your hole mind. There is only the happiness fully in your life...
“YES, father!”
The son understands what his father’s gift meaning to him right now, and he is happy and still continues to do it in next year.

Moral: It is no matter how your gift expensive or value thing, it is depended on how it meaning to you.